Creative destroyer

10th Apr 2013, 7:00 AM in Profana Tragedia
Creative destroyer
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Gren 10th Apr 2013, 1:02 PM edit delete reply
Yeah, sure, because you promised to Max, cool story bro.

And the last two panels certainly reminds me a lot to a Bleach scene.X3
Stu & Jojo 10th Apr 2013, 3:37 PM edit delete reply
Stu & Jojo
Bleach? D: it ain't good
Gren 10th Apr 2013, 5:13 PM edit delete reply
meh... never was the best manga of the world, but at least was pretty good for a while... was it.

By the way, I gave you a longer post in the HP forum, but if there's no problem I post the same here. If you want, you can answer me where you feel more comfortable. I quote myself:

I just read through the whole archive and I have to say I LOVE YOUR COMIC SO MUCH! You certainly have truly awesome characters here (specially that white haired Albert Wesker named Winter as Silly Zealot said XD). I felt touched several times as also laughed out loud and almost fell of my chair too many times. Excellent plot, you are a really talented writer, can't wait to see how this story will continue X3. By the way, I don't know why but a lot of the backgrounds reminded me the old Resident evil's games for no reason (maybe was the blur? XD)

I have also some questions if you don't mind:

-Why you have locked Max and Grape in the character's section of the webpage? Are you planning to change their appearance or something? (yeah I can read through that shadows XD)

-I know this is a comic of silly animals and not everything have to make sense, but how it works Max's ability? It's something about Magic or Science? It have something to do with having Pete's mana? And what about Eyesight?

-Since Fido developed powers for having Pete's mana that means everyone who have it would do the same? Or maybe only those who Pete considered potential avatars like Peanut and Grape (besides Fido) will do it?

-When Pete said he wanted Spike to be his knight, he meant he wanted him to be his avatar or his follower? Or maybe none of this?

-And the last one, Horus, the power of Fido, have something to do with that fire-bird spirit trapped by Tarot and then entrusted to Sabrina? (I think his name is Xin)

Now changing subjects, I suppose you have your reasons, but I thought Peanut and Sabrina would be a best support to Spike since they have more experience with all of this supernatural stuff (you know, like passing through dimentions, time traveling, fighting with gargoyles, etc). Or maybe you just wanted to do this in Rambo style (pure brute force) or giving them a moment ALONE (*gasp* what are you planning? Poor Grape, she's always the target of the shippers XD)

I know it's a bit out of character, but I love Tarot's attitude. She certainly hates Spike, and most likely be the same with King (who I suppose will be part of this story somehow since Pete is involved in this).

Now please take this as a constructive criticism, but I think the weakest part of this story was Max's backstory. Don't get me wrong, I love Max, he's one of my favorites characters and is so awesome seeing him having an epic story, but it's just I found it too many flaws. For example: how could be him a mercenary if he never killed a person? In what moment he feigns cowardice when he's always trying to show-off his bravery? How could be him called “earcut” when his ear hadn't been bite when Jeff adopted him? Why he left the organization when the only family he had was in there?

You don't need to answer this, but I was wondering since Max is now in a dog body will be victim of the same effects suffered by King of “being attracted to the members of his current species”. And since Primo have a pretty good amount of fangirls, well, that problem will fit pretty well XD (maybe having a crush on Vanessa? That would be priceless).

And Peanut, being so oblivious as always, he will sure do a big mess taking the role of Spike. I wouldn't surprise if he found the personal stuff of Spike and then goes directly to knock Winter's (or Slash) door with the purpose of finding some answer or solutions for Spike's problem. If he wasn't surprised at all with all the magic and cosmic stuff, then I suppose this crazy scientist stuff will have the same effect on him.

And for last, I give a prediction: We will see Eyesight again in this arc. Taking the last words he said before die, it's for sure he went to the hell. I'll say he will appear in the Ice Lake (since he is a penguin duh)

P.S.: I'm REALLY sorry for the long post. Keep doing this great work, pal. ;)

Stu & Jojo 10th Apr 2013, 8:10 PM edit delete reply
Stu & Jojo
Till the end of Soul Society saga... After that, Bleach is terrible...

Ps: I've answered on the forum before seeing this comment :3
Silly Zealot 10th Apr 2013, 5:31 PM edit delete reply
"Ding! Exactly!" Cartoon spirits are so formal.
Wait, Spike, what are you doing? Are you leaving the ship? No! Don't do it, vada a bordo, cazzo! ( Webcomic by italian authors, characters sailing on a boat: I HAD to say that!)
CHAOKOCartoons 11th Apr 2013, 6:47 AM edit delete reply
wait Spike, why pull out your sythe when you can just hug them???
Gren 11th Apr 2013, 6:07 PM edit delete reply
Thank you for answer me in the forum ^^. I have one last question:

After seen the opening video of the second arc and considering the answer you gave me in the forum that Winter and Slash are coming back soon, then it's probably their role in the story ends at the final of this arc. My question is if you're planning to end the series after arc 2 or is there anything more in the plot?
Stu & Jojo 11th Apr 2013, 7:40 PM edit delete reply
Stu & Jojo
Yes, I'll conclude in... i didn't count them actually, probably before an hypothetical chapter 20. Winter is the main villain, it began from him, it'll end with him, even if i'd have ideas for a continuation i probably won't use xD