Talking at the Warehouse Pub

1st Oct 2012, 8:00 AM in The Cold Web
Talking at the Warehouse Pub
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Silly Zealot 1st Oct 2012, 7:58 PM edit delete reply
Can I make some grammar corrections?
Second panel: "We could end up fighting him" should be without the "on".
Fourth panel: "If you demonstrate" should be without the "'ll".
That's all. :)
Stu & Jojo 1st Oct 2012, 8:40 PM edit delete reply
Stu & Jojo
oh, less than i thought xD i'll fix tomorrow, thanks for the corrections ^^
Legendario13 2nd Oct 2012, 4:23 AM edit delete reply
He got in the Game with the wrong foot